GM Advice: The Two Detail Rule
Which brings me to my next reason for the Two Detail Rule: I really dislike flavor text. I have never heard any flavor text that made me more interested in the world I am supposed to be interacting with. I am sure that some of you love it dearly and perhaps you or someone you know reads it with such gusto and grandeur that it never fails to impress. I have found that what it does is slow games down to a grinding halt while creating something akin to the backgrounds in Myst: Beautiful, unliving landscapes.
So, you have probably already figured out what the Two Detail Rule is, but here you go: Any time you mention something that is important, be it a room, a person, a place, or whatever other category I forgot, think of two things that make it stand out, point them out and shut up. The rule is fractal, too. So, if you have a room with a table in it and pelts hanging on the wall (two details!) describe the table as made from wood rotting apart, smelling of strange fungus and the pelts as stained with blood and cut with a lack of care. The scene now feels much more alive and you haven’t worked yourself into a frenzy describing the fracture patterns of the stone.
Of course many scenes have more than two details. Obviously this is magnificent, especially when you are talking about the contents of a room. Just give each thing or category of things (describe all of the tables together unless one is special) two details and move on with your story telling. Obviously, this requires some discretion: Not every rock or stream blocking a path needs details, but you can probably think of at least two things in the room that do deserve them. However, if a room is largely empty, it can’t hurt to describe the stream as filthy and clogged with debris.
The rock is just a rock.
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